Englih page feedback by carlson hui
Newspaper feedback by parmar tam
French page feedback by carlson hui
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Theme and purpose is clear
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Navigation bar is convinient
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Paragraph informative but have little type errors
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overwhelming text
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Proficient use of pictures


French page feedback by Esther leung
Frenc page feedback by Ahmd Eshal




What went well:-I really like the organization in the layout so the visitors will find it easier to navigate-I also like the color choice you implemented into your pages because it is not too bright and shocking and yet not too dull Things to Improve:- For the Homepage, maybe make the background a color and then add images to it so that the visitors don't get overwhelmed by the shocking background.- About Page you don't need to include the programs and clubs, remember the about page is ABOUT the website and not the school.- I think that sometimes the audience doesn't want to read chunks of text or just looking at it makes it look boring, one thing you could do is to put some images in between so that the reader feels more replaced and can read it in little chuks!- Finally: try and align things to the center a little better!

